MY SHORT MYSTERY STORY
By : Jihan Tan
Hi all! i am a new blogger. I came from Indonesia and i want to share a short story that i made for fun. I hope you enjoyed it^_^ (and i am very sorry if there were some typo words or wrong vocabularies cause i were not master on this T_T)
Hi all! i am a new blogger. I came from Indonesia and i want to share a short story that i made for fun. I hope you enjoyed it^_^ (and i am very sorry if there were some typo words or wrong vocabularies cause i were not master on this T_T)
BY: Jihan Tan
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Scarlet and i were best friend since we were kids. This summer, Scarlet and i want to have a summer just both of us on a village down the mountain. "Are you sure with this?" Scarlet asked me. "Sure. why? are you scared?" i asked her with a smirk on my face. "N... no... but i was just..." Scarlet grab her hand bag tightly "I just have a bad feeling about this. You know, we were just a high school student and we have limited money on our pocket" i laughed hard. "Ahahahah... that was what you worried about? I have told you that my parents have already agree of my plan and support us by paying every cost that we've made, right?" "But...." i hold her shoulders and said "Don't worry, we'll be fine" she look at my eyes and then smiled. "O... okay. i'll trust you Jane" i put my best smile and grab her hand. "Look! That's our bus! next destination is KHONGORYN ELS VILLAGE!"
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Rrrrn.....
The bus walk slowly as time keep going. I looking through the window next to me and lay my chin on my hand palm and yawn. "*yawn* this is boring. Hey, Scar..." i'm turned my face to Scarlet that looking down to her shivering hand on her thigh and her face also look so pale. "Hey, are you okay? we can canceled this and return home if you don't feel so well?" she turn her face to me and she look so frightened. "Scar..." "NO!!!" she yelled at me and makes me shocked. "I mean... it's okay. I just felt a little bit cold here..." Here? In the middle of hot summer? "Aww, okay" i pull out my jacket from my bag and put it on her. "Here, if you wanna, use it to warm your self please...." she grab it and tighten it on her body. "Thanks" and then she lays her head on my shoulder and sleep. I smiled.
We have been together for a lot of year together. Spending our happy childhood together. I have threat her as my lil' sis and always protect her because i was the one who act so boyish and she though that i am her big b. Even though she was a year older than me. We always spend our time together and having good memories every day. When i was going to close my eyes because i get too sleepy, the bus stop and pulling black smoke on the back side.
"What's going on???..." i wake scarlet up and walked to the back side of the bus. "Holly..." the machine was blown up. "What should we do? We can't go back home nor continue our journey. Moreover we were in the middle of nowhere! All that i can see is forest, road, and forest again! Jane!" Scarlet got really panic. I turn my face and seeking for a place for all of us to stay for a while. At least we have a roof to cover from rain. In the corner of my eyes, i saw a big old house not really far from where we were.
"Look! There's a house near the hill! we can cover our selves there!" I said it loudly to all of the bus passenger. They look a little lighten up. "Oh! I think we can stay there for a while until our helper came! Good idea!" said one of the passenger. I smiled proudly. "What are we waiting for? Let's go!" said the bus driver. I have a happy feeling right now, but i don't know why i also have a bad feeling for this. Meh. What is the worst thing that will happen?
*TO BE CONTINUED...*
Aaaaaaaaahhh i just saw my last post before i edit it and i really embarassed ughh (///>///<///) well, i hope you like it so far and i have ig if you want to see my art (i actually do art that's why my story is so bad haha) and my ig user name is massao7. See ya <3
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Rrrrn.....
The bus walk slowly as time keep going. I looking through the window next to me and lay my chin on my hand palm and yawn. "*yawn* this is boring. Hey, Scar..." i'm turned my face to Scarlet that looking down to her shivering hand on her thigh and her face also look so pale. "Hey, are you okay? we can canceled this and return home if you don't feel so well?" she turn her face to me and she look so frightened. "Scar..." "NO!!!" she yelled at me and makes me shocked. "I mean... it's okay. I just felt a little bit cold here..." Here? In the middle of hot summer? "Aww, okay" i pull out my jacket from my bag and put it on her. "Here, if you wanna, use it to warm your self please...." she grab it and tighten it on her body. "Thanks" and then she lays her head on my shoulder and sleep. I smiled.
We have been together for a lot of year together. Spending our happy childhood together. I have threat her as my lil' sis and always protect her because i was the one who act so boyish and she though that i am her big b. Even though she was a year older than me. We always spend our time together and having good memories every day. When i was going to close my eyes because i get too sleepy, the bus stop and pulling black smoke on the back side.
"What's going on???..." i wake scarlet up and walked to the back side of the bus. "Holly..." the machine was blown up. "What should we do? We can't go back home nor continue our journey. Moreover we were in the middle of nowhere! All that i can see is forest, road, and forest again! Jane!" Scarlet got really panic. I turn my face and seeking for a place for all of us to stay for a while. At least we have a roof to cover from rain. In the corner of my eyes, i saw a big old house not really far from where we were.
"Look! There's a house near the hill! we can cover our selves there!" I said it loudly to all of the bus passenger. They look a little lighten up. "Oh! I think we can stay there for a while until our helper came! Good idea!" said one of the passenger. I smiled proudly. "What are we waiting for? Let's go!" said the bus driver. I have a happy feeling right now, but i don't know why i also have a bad feeling for this. Meh. What is the worst thing that will happen?
*TO BE CONTINUED...*
Aaaaaaaaahhh i just saw my last post before i edit it and i really embarassed ughh (///>///<///) well, i hope you like it so far and i have ig if you want to see my art (i actually do art that's why my story is so bad haha) and my ig user name is massao7. See ya <3
